"In Bravil lies the home of the Lucky Old Lady and a "lucky" Bosmer, and today fortune shines on both... but only one shines back."
"...Ungolim, the leader of the Black Hand, the Listener. He routinely visits the Lucky Old Lady statue each night, which is where he receives the list of people to visit that have performed the Night Mother Ritual..."
A scene from the "A Kiss Before Dying" TES IV: Oblivion quest. My entry for a contest held by the ElderScrolls.net and gamazavr.ru
The first thing that strikes me about this work is how everything is centered and balanced. The chapel steeple lined up against the moon with the goddess at the center; the other moon off to the left while the statue and the protagonist are leaning towards the right. I am reminded a of Stanley Kubric's work. Though despite technical superiority of this piece, the work does not leave me cold. The the protagonist who has just been struck is obviously in a state of shock as he has just dropped his sword. The pool of blood at his feet also has a humanizing effect. The only fault I would find with this work--and this is just a personal preference--is lack of some bluer tints, but again that's just my personal preference. You work is excellent. Best of luck in the contest.
As much as I was disappointed with mostly shallow contents of Oblivion, this one story actually moved me. The Paranoia quest is a great topic to begin with.
About the picture itself: firstly, I love the composition. Moons, chapel of Julianos, the statue (I don't recall it from the game though, is it Dibella?) and the main character himself.
Now, the strongest, most striking thing about this picture, is the contrast between monumental chapel and statue, and the grotesque dying elf, that just got shot in the neck. His posture is not a heroic death in any way, like often depicted elswhere. Instead, we're presented with a spazm, unnaturally bent head and torch just yet fallen and hitting the ground. This "still life" element gives a lot of dynamics to the scene.
I really like the fact, that the dealer of this death is not found in the picture. First of all, it implies in a great way how anonymous and different TES main characters are. Secondly it makes it simply more interesting. Gives it some mistery, an area for thinking (while often these days everything is given to us right away, leaving no doubts).
The statue's posture and look suggests mercy (and that is why Dibella was my first shot). It is a bitter irony, a stone cold depiction of merciful goddess, aware witness, but unable to do anything.
And then there is the monumental cathedhral, edgy and dour, for me somehow representing justice, but I guess that might be an overinterpretation.
It's a very artistic, inspiring piece, not that often found amongst FanArts. Only fault I could find is that during rain the moons shouldn't be that visible, but that's just a tiny detail. Overall, the piece is great, I wish more people (including me) would put so much thought to their works.
This is absolutely gorgeous. I found it on Tumblr and immediately recognized the Lucky Old Lady. I thought I recognized Ungolim, but followed the link to just be sure. I love being able to tell the source without citation and I think you did that here. The rain adds a certain melancholy element to the piece.
About the picture itself: firstly, I love the composition. Moons, chapel of Julianos, the statue (I don't recall it from the game though, is it Dibella?) and the main character himself.
Now, the strongest, most striking thing about this picture, is the contrast between monumental chapel and statue, and the grotesque dying elf, that just got shot in the neck. His posture is not a heroic death in any way, like often depicted elswhere. Instead, we're presented with a spazm, unnaturally bent head and torch just yet fallen and hitting the ground. This "still life" element gives a lot of dynamics to the scene.
I really like the fact, that the dealer of this death is not found in the picture. First of all, it implies in a great way how anonymous and different TES main characters are. Secondly it makes it simply more interesting. Gives it some mistery, an area for thinking (while often these days everything is given to us right away, leaving no doubts).
The statue's posture and look suggests mercy (and that is why Dibella was my first shot). It is a bitter irony, a stone cold depiction of merciful goddess, aware witness, but unable to do anything.
And then there is the monumental cathedhral, edgy and dour, for me somehow representing justice, but I guess that might be an overinterpretation.
It's a very artistic, inspiring piece, not that often found amongst FanArts. Only fault I could find is that during rain the moons shouldn't be that visible, but that's just a tiny detail. Overall, the piece is great, I wish more people (including me) would put so much thought to their works.
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