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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

WOW great work! It really makes an impact! The argonian and orc both look really detailed and just quite nice overall.

Now the critisisms
-For the characters, it looks like the Khajiit is the protagonist (if there is to be one) As bothe the orc and argonian seem to be after him. If so you pulled this off nicely but their faces could use both more detail and more emotion. The Khajiit in particular looks a little odd having a lack of detail next to the argonian, who i think could look more menacing or at least under more stress seeing that the world is falling out beneath him! And wow that must be hot to stand on haha.

-As for the landscape, the fire is really amazing and the smoke is too, but again, the base of the white-gold tower is too un-detailed, maybe adding some smoke to the base would make that more believable. You did a good job making the top of the tower and whatever that thing is up there look just way up high, though, the nearby claws, while good looking, seem slightly out of place. They don't follow the tower's appearence of coming from way high up, maybe because the chain does not shrink the higher it goes up?

Well that all i could find. Most of which is minor except maybe the tower's base. Again really great and original! If this was just slightly better, i would love to have a poster like this.

Oh, and just a suggestion, it would add the the drama of the scene to put silhouettes in the smoke fighting as well!